Friday, September 6, 2013
My Name
My name is not anything special. It was just a name my parents liked. I have never loved it, or hated it. My name has just been my name. Some say it means brave. Some say it means wealthy and great. To me though, it's just what I answer to. Some people take pride in their names, exclaiming that they are bound for greatness! Others consider there names wretched things. Things that they would just leave behind or beat with a stick if they could. While with mine, i am content. Whether people think it is captivating, or just plain awful, it is just who i am. Something that i wouldn't want to change. That, is something i do care about
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DARREN DINOSAUR <33333 xD
ReplyDeleteThat was a really good job . It was captivating and interesting also funny . Very nice ~Ivy
ReplyDeleteI liked well written and short and how you stated your feelings about your name
ReplyDeleteI liked all the words you used. Like wretched for example. But I thought it was good.
ReplyDeleteI like how it was serious. I also liked how you used the literary term.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you found a different why to explain your name without using the history or origin
ReplyDeleteI liked it. It was very honest . I liked how you said you never loved or hated it.
ReplyDeleteIt was very good. I liked how you talked about how other people feel about there own names.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how honest you were in the poem. I can relate because I just answer to my name as well and don't think anything about it.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you said your name is something you won't change, and said how its just something you are.
ReplyDeleteI thought your poem was good and was well written. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI agree
DeleteI liked how honest you were about your name and how you feel about it. The part where you said "beat it with a stick if they could" was funny...very well written.
ReplyDeleteI like how you said you wouldn't want to change your name. I also like how you don't have an attachment to your name.
ReplyDeleteDarren, good thoughts on your name. You mention how others may feel about their name, yet I wanted to know more about how you felt about your own name.
ReplyDeleteI liked yours because you did not think that your name was that great or anything which made it different
ReplyDeleteI like the words you used. They made it much better to read
ReplyDeleteI like how you put your personal feelings into it.
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